JULIAJULIA2007
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Bonjour, en Anglais je devais raconter mes vacances de Noël, pouvez vous vérifier si tout est bien écrit (la conjugaison, grammaire, orthographe...)
(Ps. Je suis une fille)
Merci en avance.

« During my holidays I went to Poland and I saw my family.
For Christmas i got a money and I ate various Polish dishes from the table (there were twenty of them)
For New Year’s Eve I went to a
concert of a very famous Polish singer, with my Cousine.
With my friends, we went shopping to the mall and we went to the cinema, to see frozen 2.
Towards the end of the holidays i went to my best friend's pajama party, we ate crisps, popcorn and various Polish snacks, and we watched Polish horrors.
During my stay in Poland I met a friend from England whom I had not seen for 4 years. »

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Réponse :

During my holidays I went to Poland and I saw my family.For Christmas I got (supprime le "a") money and I ate various Polish dishes from the table (there were twenty of them)For New Year’s Eve, I went to a concert of a very famous Polish singer, with my cousin.With my friends, we went shopping in the mall and we went to the cinema, to see frozen 2.Towards the end of the holidays I went to my best friend's pajama party, we ate crisps, popcorn and various Polish snacks, and we watched Polish horrors.During my stay in Poland I met a friend from England whom I had not seen for 4 years. »

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Voila, j'ai corriger quelques petites erreurs mais ton texte est très bien dans l'ensemble !

ASSIA8379

Bonjour,

Réponse:

During my holidays, I went to Poland and I saw my family.

For Christmas,I got (c'est préférable d'enlever le "a") money and I ate various Polish dishes from the table (there were twenty of them)

For New Year's Eve , I went to a concert of very famous Polish singer, with my cousin.

With my friends, we went shopping in the mall and we went to the cinema, to see frozen 2.

Towards the end of the holidays, I went to my best friend's pyjama party, we ate crisps, popcorn and various Polish snacks, and we watched Polish horrors.

During my stay in Poland, I met a friend from England whom I had not seen for 4 years.

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J'espère t'avoir aidé :)