• "Fiona is a young
American ...." mets girl, pour plus de précisions
•
" Her friends want to
prevent it to going away because they think it's dangerous, but she
is determined.
" Ta phrase n'est pas correcte, si tu voulais dire que ses ami(e)s pensent qu'aller loin, autre part est dangereux tu devrais dire "Her friends want to prevent her that going away is dangerous but she's determined" *
•
" Fiona doesn't listen
to advice of her friends.
"
Tu commence à parler au preterit, ne jongle pas entre les temps et choisis en un seul ; "Fiona didn't listen to her friends advices" *
