Bonjour!!! Ma prof d'anglais nous as donner une invention à crée. J'ai fais la mienne mais pourrais vous me corriger s'il vous plait!!!! Merci d'avance :)

Dry mobile

If find it very convenient its is economic consequently, thanks to it, you will be able to make dry the outdoor linen.

Moreover, il allows you to take no square in house.

Bresides, I don't find it convenient because when its is windy the outdoor can fall down.

If you not made not attention, you are likely to that somebody you theft.

Indeed, you should not leave outside when it raining.

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Dry mobile
If find it very convenient it is economic consequently, thanks to it, you will be able to make dry the outdoor linen.
Moreover, he allows you to take no square in the house.
Besides, I don't find it convenient because when it is windy the outdoors can fall down.
If you not made not attention, you are likely to that somebody you theft.
Indeed, you should not leave outside when it's raining.

A "it is economic" tu as mit "its is" alors que tu dois mettre soit 'it's' ou 'it is' tu as fait deux fois cette erreur. Puis tu as mit le sujet 'il' en francais au lieu de mettre 'he'. Tu as oublier 'the' devant house. Tu as écrit 'Bresides' se qui ne veut rien dire mais je pense que tu voulais écrire 'Besides' qui veut 'd'ailleurs'. Tu as oublié le s à 'outdoor' car c'est au pluriel donc ca s'écrit "outdoors". Et pour finir tu as oublié le s' à "it's rainnin". Voila ;)