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Dear diary

Today I would like to talk about my extraordinary trip to Hawaii. It was an adventure that I can never forget. First and foremost because it's like a world where you can go anywhere from the top of the volcanic mountains to the deep in the ocean surrounding this wonderful island, it's just an amazing place to visit, I couldn't expect better!
Hawaii, an archipelago located in the middle of the Pacific Ocean indeed contains 137 islands, of which the eight main islands are Niihau, Kauai, Molokai, Lanai, Kahoolawe, Maui, Hawaii Island and Oahu. Furthermore, this archipelago is a mix of culture and history that cannot be found anywhere else.

To begin with, I chose this place because Hawaii has always been my dream destination. And it is finally 8 years later at the age of 24 that my dream is finally achieved. So, I decided to describe this wonderful 6 days in my diary

I went on Holiday to Hawaii by plane. When I got off the plane, the landscape was just extraordinary. It ‘s really the most beautiful island I ever seen . For this first day I decided to learn about the history and culture of Hawaii. Hawaii expresses the cultural diversity of the island through the languages because the residents speak Hawaiian but also English; They express it also through their music and cooking

When came the second day I went to Volcanoes National Park in Hawaii. I was able to learn that the most massive volcano in the world is Mauna Launa with 5600 feet and the most active volcano is Kilauea with 20 000 feet. I also learned that the first eruption was a Holly Mau Mau crater in 80 years.